By Ken Miyamoto from ScreenCraft · November 15, 2023
You have read all about the importance of writing amazing openings in your screenplays to hook and engage the script reader — and eventual audience — as quickly as possible. You have also learned how vital it is to conjure shocking or impactful endings to your stories to create cathartic conclusions for them. But there’s something just as significant as those two screenplay elements that your scripts need — a midpoint.
A story’s midpoint is a moment when characters face higher stakes, significant changes, greater challenges, or story-altering revelations that propel the story into a new direction.
Beginnings and endings are often seen as the enjoyable aspects of crafting a screenplay, while the middle section is commonly regarded as the part that screenwriters find most challenging and daunting.
Why? Because while the goals of beginnings and endings are relatively straightforward — grabbing the audience’s attention and providing cathartic or thrilling conclusions — the goal of a midpoint is somewhat nebulous — to keep your audience engaged.
The midpoint must sustain the audience’s investment in the protagonist’s journey through conflict, tension, and character development while preventing the story from becoming stagnant or predictable.
How do you do that?
Midpoints come in different narrative shapes and sizes — but all exist to accomplish a combination of similar objectives.
Midpoints exist to accomplish these things within the screenplay. And you can utilize a few different types of Midpoints to do so.
The obvious answer is, well, in the middle of your story. There’s no particular page requirement for a Midpoint. However, for it to serve its purpose, it does need to trend somewhere within the middle of your story. But, let’s go over a few examples from popular story structure paradigms:
In Blake Snyder’s Beat Sheet, the Midpoint comes roughly at Page 55 (give or take a few pages) in the average screenplay, which should be anywhere from 110 to 120 pages. But you shouldn’t limit yourself to a particular page. Formulas like beat sheets offer great options, but there’s no end-all-be-all be-all page number where Midpoints should be.
Syd Field spoke about the Midpoint in his earlier screenwriting book, Screenplay: The Foundations of Screenwriting, explaining the Midpoint as, “An important scene in the middle of the script, often a reversal of fortune or revelation that changes the direction of the story.”
In Chris Vogler’s approach to Joseph Campbell’s The Hero’s Journey, the Midpoint is presented as The Ordeal where the situation for the protagonist worsens and they face even tougher challenges, which can sometimes lead to a crisis in their life. The Ordeal is listed as number eight out of twelve stages. No specific page count is mentioned as Vogler states that not all of the twelve stages need to be present in a story — with The Ordeal being the likely exception because every story should have some type of Midpoint.
Think of the three-act structure, which is the most widely used basic story structure in screenplays and movies.
We’ve already covered the importance of a strong beginning and an impactful ending. The Midpoint is placed in the middle of those screenplay elements to create a consistently engaging story.
Read More: How to Use 3-Act Structure to Better Write Your Screenplay
So, with that said, we know that the Midpoint should lie somewhere within the second act of your script. Here’s a general story beat example laying out a potential structural lead-up to the Midpoint.
That’s where your midpoint belongs.
Some mistake the Midpoint as the moment in the story when Luke Skywalker decides to join Obi-Wan Kenobi on his adventure. This is more of a Call to Adventure moment, which is also accompanied by the Meeting the Mentor, Refusal of the Call, and Crossing the Threshold moment, all of which generally take place in the first act. Instead, the true Midpoint is best interpreted as the moment that Han, Luke, Obi-Wan, and Chewbacca (and droids) are pulled into the Death Star.
The love story of Jack meeting Rose encompasses the first act of the story, leading us into the second where tension arises as Cal and others aboard the ship stand in between their love affair. The Midpoint occurs when the ship hits the iceberg. From that moment forth, the forbidden love story evolves into a higher-stakes survival story.
Barbie meets her mentor (Weird Barbie) and then crosses the threshold from Barbieland into the real world, with Ken in tow. The two of them go through the culture shock of seeing how the real world really is and how different it is from what they know.
The true Midpoint occurs when Mattell discovers that they’ve crossed the threshold and must capture them before any harm is done. The culmination of the Midpoint is when Ken discovers patriarchy and brings that back to Barbieland. This creates higher stakes for Barbie, her friends, and Barbieland itself as she struggles to right Ken’s wrongs and educate the rest of Barbieland on all that she has learned. All of that happens after the Midpoint.
Midpoints offer you the chance to shake things up in your scripts. Script readers are used to boring second acts because a majority of the scripts they read don’t have strong Midpoints. Instead, the scripts they read from novice screenwriters usually have first acts that go on for too long, followed by rushes into third acts and climaxes where nothing is set up in an interesting way.
Don’t fall into that all-too-familiar trap. Instead, have fun with finding entertaining and impactful Midpoints that continue to capture the interest of script readers and audiences all the way through to your exciting and enthralling conclusions. If you give them that engrossing experience from beginning to end — and everything in between — you’ll be doing your job as a cinematic storyteller.
Read More: Understanding the Midpoint Mirror
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Ken Miyamoto has worked in the film industry for nearly two decades, most notably as a studio liaison for Sony Studios and then as a script reader and story analyst for Sony Pictures.
He has many studio meetings under his belt as a produced screenwriter, meeting with the likes of Sony, Dreamworks, Universal, Disney, Warner Brothers, as well as many production and management companies. He has had a previous development deal with Lionsgate, as well as multiple writing assignments, including the produced miniseries Blackout, starring Anne Heche, Sean Patrick Flanery, Billy Zane, James Brolin, Haylie Duff, Brian Bloom, Eric La Salle, and Bruce Boxleitner, the feature thriller Hunter’s Creed, and many Lifetime thrillers. Follow Ken on Twitter @KenMovies and Instagram @KenMovies76