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Kevin B.THE FINAL DRAFT (Feature Film)
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Angella D.THE FIRST 20 PAGES (Feature Film)
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Tairon R.THE FIRST DRAFT (Feature Film)
“When I first received my notes, I was a little nervous to read what you all thought about my screenplay. Though this draft didn't pass the mark, I'm okay with that because I received some great feedback, highlighting both the highs and the lows. I'm ready to turn my script around and get it ready for the market with TSL's help. I can't wait to send in my revised script for more feedback. THANK YOU, TSL!!!”
Denise C.THE FINAL DRAFT (Feature Film)
“Thanks again! Your feedback form doesn't do justice to the quality of service from your organization; what I learned from the pages and pages of feedback; and the cost relative to an in-depth, detailed, and honest set of notes that I can use to make my script better. I will recommend TSL Notes to all my friends and will definitely use your service again in the future.”
Jana D.THE FINAL DRAFT (Feature Film)
“I have to say, I was skeptical about TSL Notes. VERY. I chose to go with the three reader option because I was curious to get a varied background of feedback, completely random. I’m very glad I did. I was pleasantly surprised with the feedback. It gave some great ideas on what really works, what doesn’t, and what needs tweaking. Thank you and your crew for a set of professional, fast turn around, and generally excellent notes.”
Robert C.THE FINAL DRAFT (Feature Film)
“Having submitted the first draft of a sitcom to TSL Notes, I was amazed when the report was returned in under 72 hours. The analysis was clear, concise and highlighted a number of issues regarding plot progression and character. All of the criticism was constructive and well-qualified by the reader. Using TSL Notes at this first draft stage brought to my attention problems that I had unwittingly created for myself, thus saving me a lot of time and anguish trying to untie the knots. Thank you The Script Lab! I look forward to sending you my second and third drafts.”
Judith W.THE FIRST DRAFT (Television)
“Thank you so much for my review! My analyst provided some great advice and, while bringing up the changes I needed to make, still made me feel like I was doing a good job and encouraged me to continue.”
Carla S.THE FINAL DRAFT (Feature Film)
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Mark B.THE FINAL DRAFT (Feature Film)
“Over the years, I've employed many different screenplay coverage/analysis services, but none have been as objective, exploratory, and forensic as TSL Notes. The feedback I got was not only actionable but also tutorial, a step-by-step guide for my craft. I now feel more confident than ever as a screenwriter, and believe it's just a matter of time before my final breakthrough. Thanks to The Script Lab for bringing me closer to this long-held dream. "I think this may be the beginning of a beautiful friendship."”
Dele E.THE FIRST DRAFT (Feature Film)
“I finally sent in my very first screenplay to be reviewed by TSL! It was a proud moment for me, but also daunting. I was pleasantly surprised to get my review back so quickly, but it made me wonder if the reader even read the whole script. Then I read the notes and realized how professional, thorough, and encouraging the analysis was. The feedback was specific to my story, yet could be used as a benchmark for all of my future screenplays. It made me realize how much work I still have to do on my screenplay and that TSL Notes will be a helpful (and necessary) resource to help me develop as a screenwriter. Thank you for your excellent service!”
Dawn M.THE FIRST DRAFT (Feature Film)
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Terry S.THE FINAL DRAFT (Feature Film)
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Charlie T.THE FINAL DRAFT (Feature Film)
“Thank you for helping guide me through the revision process! I'm going to do another draft and submit it to a contest or two to see how it does ― but I definitely hope to send it back through TSL Notes before I send it to any producers! You've really helped me. Thank you!”
Alice H.THE FINAL DRAFT (Feature Film)
“Thank you! Speedy coverage of my short film. Heard exactly what I needed to hear about flaws, plus encouragement about strengths. That's always the best combination of feedback.”
Chris O.THE FIRST 20 PAGES (Feature Film)
“When I saw that TSL was offering 72-hour turnaround for feature screenplay coverage, I was intrigued. When does that ever happen? Typically, I'd have to wait weeks or months for feedback. I was blown away when the coverage was in my inbox after just 48 hours. WOW! (And good to know if you're in a hurry to better your script.) The notes were done with an encouraging and constructive tone. While I might not change my screenplay according to all the suggestions given, I do like the challenge of an honest and knowledgeable opinion. I can now see plenty of places to better the story, and I’m thankful for it.”
Maria L.THE FINAL DRAFT (Feature Film)
“I loved the different coverage options available, depending on how far along you are with your script. Response time was great, the feedback was straightforward and specific, making it extremely helpful. Thank you, TSL Notes!”
Tony T.THE FINAL DRAFT (Television)
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Anthony M.THE FIRST DRAFT (Television)